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The Glass Castle (Chapter Excerpt/Book Sneak Peek)

By Asche Keegan

"Years from now, you'll still have your stars." --The Glass Castle by Jeannette Walls

Raz wandered through the clouds until she found the castle.

Unlike the medieval fortresses of Europe or the towering mosques of the Middle East, the castle shone. Light glanced off the glass paneling in every direction, dazzling her eyes as she approached. A thin layer of shimmering air seemed to form a protective sphere around the building, and the moat was formed from partial raindrops, floating in a suspension design next to each other. Only one way could be seen over the moat: a lowered drawbridge just past an open gate.

A tall man stood surveying the clouds, but indirectly watching her as she approached. Though clothed in an official uniform, his shoulders slumped, and he looked weary. Yet, as she drew closer, he straightened, placing his hand over his heart.

“Good evening,” he said. “May I have your name?”

Raz paused. She could never fully be sure what kind of monsters her mind cooked up—for to be able to float on clouds, one must truly be in a dream—but giving him her name did not seem too much an issue.

“Raspberry Curry,” she replied. “Yours?”

He glanced up at her in surprise, grinning. “I’m Ryan, but it’s nowhere near as pretty a name as yours though, Raspberry.”

Raz could feel her cheeks heating, and she looked away, shy. “Thank you, Ryan, but please, call me Raz.”

He nodded, pulling a glimmering rod of prismatic light from his pocket. He slipped a finger into the top, unrolling it like a scroll. “It looks like Lady Felise is already expecting you!” Ryan said. “That certainly makes things easier.”

“Who is Lady Felise?” Raz asked.

“Our leader and teacher,” he said. “And just so you are not surprised, she is also a shapeling.”

The castle loomed above them, and a shiver of delight worked its way through her. “A shapeling? I thought those only existed in fantasies," she said. 

Ryan chuckled, pointing around them. “The clouds are the best place to find them.” Gesturing for her to follow him inside, he then turned back and pulled a lever that closed the gates.

They slid back in place effortlessly, and Raz could not help but feel as if she had locked herself inside. When she expressed her unease to Ryan, he adamantly shook his head.

“Demons haunt these hills, white as the clouds, and if I leave the gate untended, they could come inside.”

Accepting his answer, she turned her attention to the main doors. Ryan knocked thrice, paused, then twice more, before they opened of their own accord. Inside, the castle seemed just as beautiful as the outdoors had, but each ray of light had been magnified through prisms that lined the doors and seams between the wall and ceiling.

“Can anyone see anything that happens?” Raz asked, running a hand along the glass walling. 

Ryan sighed. “Only if you forget to turn on the opaque filter, which I have done more than once. I do not recommend it.” Raz chuckled softly, and he blushed. "It's surprisingly easy to do. Speaking of which,” he said, “This is your room.”

He pointed towards a beautifully decorated room with a bed that seemed almost entirely made of light. “Here is where you can rest and recuperate before Lady Felise can come speak with you. Gowns and other dresses will be in the closet, and you can turn the opacity on and off with the button here,” he said, pointing to a clear knob with a golden ring around its outside edge.

“I will come back to pick you up before your meeting if you would like?” he asked, an awkward smile making its way across his face.

Raz smiled. “That would be delightful.”

The two of them shared a smile before he nodded and left the room.

First, she adjusted the opacity to allow just enough light into the room without revealing the specifics of what she was doing. Then, she opened her closet. Beautiful silks of every color practically spilled out onto the floor, and she gasped in delight. Poring through them, she was suddenly startled by a sneeze.

“Who’s there?” she asked, jumping backward.

“Dang it! I hate my stupid nose!”

“Get out of my closet! Show yourself!” she exclaimed, peering past the dresses, trying to make out the person speaking.

To her surprise, a teenage boy her own age pulled himself to his feet. He seemed just as surprised to see her as she was to see him. “Look, you can’t blame me for hiding in your dresses. They’re the only thing in this castle not see-through.”

He was tall and lanky, and his freckles danced across his face as he chattered on. “Seriously! One would think they’d put more things to hide behind in this place.” Raz found herself distracted by his buoyant red hair, where faint knobs protruded from the top of his head, making a straight line down the back of it. Shuffling a couple steps to the side, she thought they traced a line all the way down his back.

“You know, I’m not blind. I can see you looking. Haven’t you ever seen a dragon changeling before?” he asked, lifting an eyebrow.

She shrugged, then glanced over her shoulder. “What’s your name, and why are you hiding in my closet? What are you hiding from?”

He glanced over his shoulder and leaned closer to her. “My name is Gregarious,” he said, boyish face growing deathly serious, “And there is something seriously wrong with this place.”

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Ahhh I hope you enjoyed the excerpt! No, the book will not be named the Glass Castle (although The Glass Castle by Jeanette Walls is amazing), just this specific chapter. Though I am currently in the middle of another book that I will be finishing first, I am excited to write this revised tale of The Message Inside! Please let me know what you think of the story so far in the comments below! I would love to hear your thoughts. 

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Update: Hello everyone! You may have noticed that updates have been farther between than normal, but that is because I have been working on a book called The Road to Requiem, for Camp NaNoWriMo this month! I am currently 30,000 words through the story after 23 days of writing it. Because I have been so busy working on this book, I have not been able to write as many short stories as I usually do.

That said, I am extremely passionate about my characters and my plotline for this novel, and I am looking forward to seeing how it turns out.

Here is an excerpt from my (unedited) prologue and a temporary cover design to hold you over until I get to writing a more official blurb/synopsis. :)

Enjoy!

Excerpt:

Ayla Wilmot, the Caretaker of the Universe, studied the malcontents before her with a steady gaze. "Do you know what kind of chaos open borders would cause to the universe?" she asked them, meeting each of their eyes before finally settling on LightWind, their leader, a representative from Sordi.

"Open borders would not cause chaos," LightWind said. He choose his words carefully, as if he knew that Ayla would leap on every hole he gave her. "Open borders would allow the universe to thrive by sharing valuable resources, magic, and technology."

Ayla considered the man, before glancing out over the waving fields she guarded. The World Between Worlds had many forms, mainly serving as a vantage point for research and approved inter-world travel. Occasionally, Ayla could intercede on behalf of God or Satan, but she tried to keep the number of people she sent back for a second chance at life to a minimum.

"LightWind, you have studied these worlds for centuries, and I can only imagine at how much your urge to travel to them has overcome your better reason. However, you know better than anyone here that there are unfinished and dangerous worlds out there, as well as worlds that could overthrow all known life in moments if they had an access point," Ayla said.

"We could keep borders closed to potentially dangerous worlds," LightWind replied.

"You would only allow underdeveloped or destroyed worlds to participate in your open borders act? What would you gain from such an action?"

"We would help them."

"With what? The representatives gathered here are from impoverished nations, scarcely surviving. Earth," and she paused, pointing to the person from the world, "Is in the middle of the Dark Ages, and no growth has been created in 500 years. If we open borders among worlds, should we expect that planet's superstition and uncleanliness to remain solely on that world? No. Those are not habits we want to spread to other worlds, especially underdeveloped ones," Ayla said.

LightWind fell silent, and as she swept her gaze across the others in the crowd, Ayla wondered if she might finally be getting through to them.

"We would need to open the doors to friendly realms of magic and heavy technology as well to allow for the underdeveloped nations," he finally said. Behind him, his followers shifted uneasily, and Ayla allowed herself a faint sensation of pleasure.

"And how do you propose that you are going to have the necessary skills to barter with extreme worlds? You are a researcher who has never traveled beyond your home world of Sordi and here. Do you have experience as an ambassador?"

"I don't, but those behind me do," LightWind said confidently. Someone cheered, and it felt like the dam gates had been broken, sending reaffirming energy surging through the crowd.

For the first time, Ayla felt uncertainty, studying the crowd and glancing back in LightWind's direction. "Do you truly believe that open borders will shape the universe for the better?" she asked him.

"Yes," he said. The others behind him murmured in approval.

Ayla sighed, and turned around, putting up a hand to keep the others from following her. "I don't trust that you are devoted to your cause," she said.

"I assure you that we are," LightWind said.

She closed her eyes to keep back the tears that threatened to fall. LightWind was a good man. "Would you die for your dream?" she asked, lifting her head as she waited for an answer.

A long moment of hesitation came, and when Ayla turned back to face the crowd, she saw that they were whispering among themselves, and he was unsure of what to say. She had ensnared him, but he should have known better than to take his grievances against the Caretaker of the Universe, second only to God and Satan.

Although, LightWind's blunt honesty had been what inspired respect in others more than anything else. His straightforwardness was why she had liked him in the first place. Her thoughts rebelled, and Ayla struggled to rein them back in. He wasn't dead yet.

Finally, LightWind stepped forward, distancing himself from the group behind him. "I can not speak on behalf of others when it comes to such a serious topic, but as for myself, I will gladly die for the next generation to have open travel and relationships among worlds."

Not even a second had passed before another individual, this time a representative from Terratretishtes stepped forward. "I will gladly die for this cause as well. And if it be a fool's errand, than so be it, and we will have learned for our history and for our future."

Edward, Earth's chief inter-world researcher, approached next. "England has no hope, yet I have found hope in the rest of the universe. I will die for this dream."

One after another, members began to step forward, until the crowd was about equally divided. Some teetered on the edge of proclaiming their undying support, and Ayla felt it important to issue a warning.

"Do not step forward if you are not truly willing to die. You will die." That decided them, and even a couple of the researchers who had approached began to look uneasy.

"Is this all?" Ayla asked. LightWind paused, turning to survey the group, counting, even as she had, under his breath.

Finally, he turned back to Ayla and nodded, to which she answered with a tightly pursed expression. "Very well. The rest of you are to return to your stations or your worlds, and allow me to speak with the others privately."

Though they seemed reluctant and disappointed, LightWind went to them, encouraging each of them to head back to where they had come from, thanking them for coming, and otherwise convincing each that they were the most important person in the World Between Worlds.

For the most part, they left in disappointment, yet with hope in their eyes and anxious glances back towards those condemned to die...the ones who shifted uneasily where they stood.

Ayla waited patiently until LightWind rejoined them, at which point she gestured for them to step back. "I'm about to offer you a deal," she said. "I will give you one chance to refuse. If you decline, go find the others out there and consider your life spared."

None spoke, so she continued. "To prove that you are serious about your cause, that you would make good ambassadors to foreign worlds, and that you have what it takes to spread your dream beyond the immediate generation, I will send you to one of four worlds, one which you are not familiar with."

Some stirred, some flinched, and satisfied with the reaction, Ayla continued. "You will never be able to leave these worlds alive again. You will have two goals. The first is to spread the word of the existence of other worlds to the people present within these four locations and study their reactions. Truly examine how they would react to information of this magnitude. Your second goal will be to appoint a successor. The successor must be a person born in the world you travel to, someone who is as passionate about your cause as you are, and is willing to take on your mantel when you die."

"You will die in these worlds, but you will have plenty of opportunities to live a full life."

"And what do we gain in return?" LightWind asked, voice catching on a nearby breeze.

"When you have convinced me that you are passionate about your cause, I will surrender these shackles to you," Ayla stated, holding up the bracelets that held the prominent sources of her power. One, white flecked with specks of gold, had been given to her by God Himself, while the other was black and streaked with grey, bestowed to her by the devil.

The price of failure for her would be high, but she had to create a bait that LightWind would not want to refuse.

LightWind smiled, confident in his choices, stepping forward. "I accept your offer."

"As do we!" someone called from behind him, and as one, the crowd roared in agreement.

Ayla closed her eyes, searching in the earth beneath her for solid stone. Moments later, the ground began to shake, and a large pillar pierced the wheat-filled fields, climbing higher and higher until it disappeared into the night sky. The others watched in awe, but Ayla had not finished.

Three more pillars climbed from their rocky home, crusting in new decorations and carvings. The four formed the points of a perfect square, equidistant from each other. "These will be the sign of our contract," Ayla said. "And by them, your descendants will know of the deal we have made."

Touching her bracelets together, she created an Opening in the universe, which she touched to the pillar, twisting as it entered the stone. The chiseling shifted accordingly, and at the bottom, the word, "Earth" appeared.


"You wanted to help underdeveloped worlds, and so I give you Earth," Ayla said. Striding towards the next pillar, about twenty feet away, she opened a second Opening, again shoving it into the stone.

The words at the bottom twisted to read, "Requiem."

"You wanted to help destroyed and warring worlds, and so I give you Requiem, a land teeming with civil war and on the verge of destruction."

Glancing at LightWind, she smiled, plucking the idea for the third world from her mind. "You said you needed to convince countries of great magical or technological power to lend their support for inter-world travel, so I give you Sordi, a combination of both."

Finally, she approached the fourth pillar, hands trembling as she opened the fourth Opening. "You vowed that you could convince the nations that could destroy the universe. I give you Widow's Mourning."

When Ayla was 100% confident that the Opening had been safely secured in the stone, she walked to the middle of the square, gesturing for LightWind to step forward. "You have one last chance to forget this entire encounter. By touching any of these portals, you accept the deal. And you can not choose Sordi, as you come from there."

"I would not have wanted it," LightWind replied. "I choose Widow's Mourning." He took a step towards the fourth pillar, lifting his hand to touch the object and thus enter the world. He hesitated, as any sane man would, but with only a last look at the sky, as if to remind himself of his dream, LightWind pressed his hand against the pillar and was sucked through the Opening.

One by one, Ayla began to assign others to the various worlds, creating a roughly equal number of people going to each. When the last woman pressed her hand against the stone of Requiem, nine people had been sent to each world, with an extra in both Widow's Mourning and Requiem.

The new silence of the World Between Worlds echoed in her ears, and Ayla crouched in the middle of her newly made square, the pain of what she had done causing what would have passed for tears from anyone else.

She had done far worse things than to lie to those who stood up to her though.

Directing her gaze to the sky, Ayla wondered what God would say about her actions, whether He would approve or disapprove. Although she had learned the most from Satan, she respected the Ruler of the World Above Worlds way more.

"I'm sorry, LightWind," she whispered into the night, before allowing a self-made breeze to carry her words and all reminders of her actions far away.
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From a window in the bank she saw a furtive figure dart across the alley. In the alley he eyed her face in the window. She pursued, he led and suddenly . . . they met. Why should Loki, the god of mischief, bother arguing with a teenage mortal? What are his motives? How much time does she have left to live?
Debatable ~ Our Mutual Disagreement is a tale of desperation, adventure, bravado, and yes, love (although never romance). 

Twenty-year-old Ashlyn Hayes is everything that Loki isn't: bold, fiery, and tempestuous to say the least. What she lacks for in skill, she makes up for with grit and sheer determination. Loki requires her unique talents to achieve his goal for a better world and heir, but despite his best efforts, Ash consistently proves impossible to tame. 

Throwing aside their personal agendas, two unbending characters will be forced to compromise or they will break each other to pieces. 

A collaboration between Thalassa Brytaye and I, Debatable is available for free on Wattpad. 

Debatable is a Marvel-based fan-fiction occurring generally after Thor: The Dark World. However, Ash is an original character, and the work within is our own. 

Be sure to let us know what you think! For questions about our writing process, characters, world-development, or more, check out our official blog or be sure to leave a comment down below!




Excerpt (Prologue)


“What am I?” the formless creature thought into the glowing vapor around it, “Where am I?” It struggled to recall any ideas from its past. What was a past? Did it have one? If not, where might it find one? It should start looking. The creature moved, slowly, through the blue vapor, stumbling awkwardly on it's two legs. Looking down it saw these limbs and a thought flashed across its blank and benumbed mind.

“I am a human!” with it there came a single memory. A voice, speaking softly, its accent curious but tone warm and soothing,

“Mortal child, did you think you could defeat me? No, boy, you are too weak a being.”

“I am a boy!” the creature gasped, a rush of thoughts – some memory, other merely dream – engulfing its awakening mind. Again and again the voice returned, saying different things, each word equally precious the boy grasped hold of them and refused to let go.

“Try again. Think deeper, you are nearly there . . . Why can you not obey? . . . Forgive me . . . I understand your passion . . . That is not what I meant . . . You are a tool in my hands . . . Well done . . . Do you believe there is more to this universe than your Earth? . . . Shh, I am here . . . You are my heir . . . Trust me . . . A son to me . . .”

A sudden, blinding pain roared through the boy's consciousness as another memory, vivid and terrible, rose in his mind. He fell to his knees, gasping in the thin stillness, his mind engulfed by the memory. Dark shadows and a blazing agony. The figures of men, cloaked and masked. A sudden cry. Stillness. The sound of a man breathing. Footsteps running. A blow to the head. Swift passage of days and nights. Pain, endless pain. All of a sudden the noises and sensations ceased, making way for one last memory.

“Open your eyes. Alekos, open your eyes,” the voice said softly.

With a weak flutter the boy's eyes opened. Looking up his gaze met that of a man whose blue-green eyes shone faintly in the surrounding darkness. Little could the boy see of this man's face, yet he remembered that he loved it. A name formed on his lips, but he was too weak to say it.

“Shh, Alekos,” the man said, “I am here, I will not leave you.”

For a moment Alekos believed him. For a moment he trusted and a smile lit his face. Then a sudden deafening roar shattered the stillness and everything went black. A flash of blue lights, pain, cold, death. Alekos could feel himself falling as if into deep, ice-cold waters. There the voice followed him with one last cry.

“Fraxinus!” it screamed, then became soft once again, “I will come for you.”

And the memories ceased. Alekos, weary with the recalling of them, sank slowly to the cold ground. With a weak breath the boy repeated those words into the stillness.

“I will come for you,” the creature sighed with contentment, sinking away, once more, into an oblivion of swirling lights.
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Reborn from Fire is my debut novel, set in the mystical world of Karasii.


Reborn to the empire, Cara was the same as any of the other Aradors: submissive, patient, and mediocre. Anytime a spark of the person she was before attempted to emerge, the oaths that bound her to service squashed it. Yet, even the Kikastan Empire cannot hold the gods at bay for long, and the servant found the courage to run, abandoning the realm of the Emperor, may his glory shake the foundations of time, forever.


However, the ruler was not content to allow her escape, and hunted by the Empire’s elite, Cara found herself swept into a prophecy of destruction and hope, capturing the hearts of the people around her, but willing to do anything necessary for survival.

On the other side of Karasii, the warrior state of Salbanda recently fell to the Empire’s dominion, and the young prince of Nogtram, whose country is next on the chopping block, headed to the heart of the Empire to bargain for terms.

The characters collide in an epic tale of fantasy, hope, magic, and destruction that will leave the mind racing. Reborn from Fire is not yet available for sale.


Excerpt:

Prologue

“Bury the memories. They are just glimmerings of your imagination. There is nothing truly there. Sweep them away. Bury, but do not forget. Never forget. There is nothing but the void around you. My voice is your lifeline. Without it, you will perish. The Emperor, may his glory shake the foundations of time, is your lifeline. Remember this, but nothing else from outside the void.”

Nothing existed in the void. For an instant, as the creature floated in murky grayness, it felt that something about its surroundings was wrong. A glimmer of understanding pulled to it, promising life, but though it tried to reach the memory, the glimmer disappeared, just out of its grasp. Devoid of anything and everything, the creature struggled. Letting loose a piercing cry, it heard nothing. No sound existed in the void.

It tried to sleep, attempting to pass into a waking trance, but though it had all the time in the world, it could not force its entity to quiet. It tried to count seconds, but after reaching the thousands, its concentration began to fly apart, and it seemed like an hour had passed in between when it had recited the last number and the next.

It had time to think, but nothing to think on. Merely an animal capable of conscious thought, it was an empty vessel, ready to be filled. What had it done to be trapped in the void? The creature felt that there had once been something more, but again, that glimmer eluded it. Trying to think without thinking, the creature drifted through a sea of emptiness.

Over time, the silence began to beat down on the creature unmercifully, trying to suffocate its very entity. It craved something else. It craved light and noise. As insanity threatened to overcome it, the creature struggled to make sound where there was no sound—any kind of noise to drive off the insanity.

Then, like a thunderclap dividing the heavens, a voice spoke. Overwhelmed by joy and feverous excitement, the creature drank in the flows of the voice. Though utterly expressionless, the voice held back oblivion and insanity. Savoring the ups and downs of the melodic language, the creature drank from the cup of life. When the creature shifted its attention to the words being conveyed, the voice disappeared.

Left alone in the darkness, it scrambled, trying to remember what had been said. It wondered if the voice was nonexistent, conjured by its own imagination as a ploy to avoid the darkness encroaching upon it. For another eon the creature drifted, recalling bits and pieces of the voice, longing for another chance to hear the words.

When insanity once more beckoned, the voice spoke again. The creature drank in the sounds, but this time, it listened to the words, processing them and tucking them away for later. The voice truly was its lifeline. Without it, the creature would be suffocated, its entity crushed by the darkness around it. Though it might have been better to simply give up than to exist where nothing existed, when it came to it, the creature still possessed that animal desire for life and survival. When the voice had left it again, the creature reviewed what had been said, memorizing the words.

“You are called Lily. That is not your name, for servants are nameless. The lowest of the low, you exist only to serve. You are an empty vessel, ready to be filled. You have come a long way to serve the Emperor, may his glory shake the foundations of time, but you have failed his Holiness. Fear not, he has given you a second chance. There will be no one below you, and everyone shall be above you. You must obey. When they come, you must swear the oaths.”

The creature gasped in relief as it processed the receding words. With them had come an understanding of hope and peace. She felt peaceful when she thought on them. She was named Lily. She had an identity now. She was ready to obey. She had failed the Emperor, may his glory shake the foundations of time, but he had sought fit to give her a second chance. Something tugged on her consciousness, but she pushed it away. It did not matter. Nothing mattered except for the words.

Seeming eons passed in this manner. Phrases tumbled frantically through Lily’s mind: “…an empty vessel…” “…serve the Emperor…” “…Obey.” Often, she would reach the brink of insanity, barely managing to hold on. However, the voice always came back, just in time to rescue her.

At the end of a torture of eons, or perhaps it was only seconds outside of the void, the voice returned, but it changed. Dripping with warmth and love, it conveyed a sense of satisfaction, joy, and hope. All this occurred in one word: “Awake.”

And Lily awoke.
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Peridot is a YA novella in progress that is not yet available for sale. 

Genres: Paranormal, fantasy, horror, young adult

Synopsis:
"Welcome to Peridot" the blue sign read. When Rue Briggs, a teacher trying to save enough money to pay for her EdD, first drove through the town, she missed it completely. Accepting a job as a private tutor for the McFarlane family, she was shocked to discover the McFarlane children independent of any parental control. When she began to teach the forty children, she discovered that something seemed off about the miniature town of Peridot. 


Eternal staircases, midnight parties, and miracles were laughed off as figments of Rue's imagination by the dark-eyed children, but Rue was convinced that something was amiss. Peridot is not yet available for sale. 



Excerpt:

There once was a daughter of hell, the bastard child of Lucifer and another fallen angel, who was born into the Dark Ages of the world. During the era she grew and prospered, feeding upon the souls of the doomed, nurtured by the praise of the pagan warriors of the Saxons. Her father had no time for her, and her mother had been murdered in one of Lucifer’s fits of rage.

She was not the only child of Lucifer, and others tried to vanquish her several times before her coming of age, but she had always been strong. As she matured further, her powers and abilities manifesting themselves within her, the daughter easily overpowered the others, gaining the favor of her father. Time passed in the mortal realm, but had little bearing on the world of the supernatural.

However, as the day of judgement grew nearer, Lucifer began to frighten, sending his children out into the mortal realm to bring others closer to his side. This they did, corrupting more angels to take their places beside the true master. The daughter fared the highest and brought back the most, and gained further praise from her father, and further anger from her siblings and distant relations. 

One day, she was sent down to Earth again, searching for more souls to carry away with her, when she encountered a Christian man who offered her a deal. If he could protect from her spell all people that he had ever lain eyes on before, he would give up his life to the daughter to serve her alone, not Lucifer, without complaint. 

The daughter was intrigued by the deal, and succumbed to the man's flattery of her. As a gift, she gave him an additional three months to say his goodbyes before she would take him away to live with her eternally. The man accepted gratefully, and they parted ways, the daughter to watch the other's actions from above. 

He did not waste even a minute talking to his family. He merely wrote a note, tucking it away, and set out through his street, saving lives by merely glancing at people. He went around his entire city the next day, calling on people, and the daughter of Lucifer watched on, bemused, certain that he would shortly give up on his noble cause. What man could look death in the face and carry on in such a way? It simply should not be done. 

The next day, he did the same thing, covering as much ground as he could, laying eyes on everyone possible. The daughter could have allowed others to kill and steal the souls of the ones that the man sacrificed so much to protect, but instead she honored the spirit of the deal, leaving her mark upon them, warning her siblings not to tamper with them either. 

And after a month had gone by, the man had traveled throughout the entire country, and he moved across the world, making stops in various locations to protect the inhabitants thereof. 

Now, the siblings of the daughter saw what had occurred, and one went to the Christian man and took on the form of a seducer to discover what deal had been made with the man. He nearly fell into the demon's grasp, but turned away upon the last second, and the daughter's mark upon him prevented the other from harming him. 

The other demons continued to affect the man with all manner of illusion and seduction, but he was impregnable. 

Finally, the end of the third month came, and the daughter came to claim her prize. She looked the man in the face and moved to take his soul to live with her eternally. But her oath stopped her from doing so, and surprised, she met his eyes, wondering how this could be so. 

And it became clear that she had been outsmarted, and the first person he had looked at had been the reflection of himself in the mirror, and she could not harm him in any way. Demons watched this exchange, hidden in the shadows, and before the daughter could stop them, they ran away to report to Lucifer what had occurred. 

Lucifer was furious when he heard, and the daughter was cast before him to atone for her transgressions. She did not plead for mercy, even as Lucifer railed himself against her. And when he moved to strike a blow, she met his eyes, and the look there caused even the Devil himself to pause short, before beating her to bloody smithereens. She did not try to fight back, even as her siblings tore into her flesh, devouring it greedily. 

When she was on the verge of death, the devil stopped his demons from finishing the deed, and gave her what he thought a fate worse than death: she was to live with the mortal she had made an oath with for the rest of her life. 

Cast out of hell, even the First Great Lord ignored her presence, deeming her a lesser worry. Forced to assume the appearance of another, she sought out the Christian man, but he did not believe her to be who she said she was. He cast her out of his home as a sorcerer, using this to explain why his faith no longer worked against her. 

And the daughter's siblings delighted in the mortality of their arch nemesis, and banding against her, sought to infect all those she came into contact with. They named her for the dead Queen Isabella to mock her fallen status among them. Eventually, she retreated into a desert town far away from the rest of the world, the Christian man's influence rubbing off on her. 

And in this voluntary isolation, she contemplated her long life, this time thinking of things more than the end of time and fallen demons. With the end for herself near, she no longer cared about the long term goal, and her alliances turned.

Her siblings had grown bored of taunting her when she lived by herself, and she escaped from her meadow dwelling, searching out the Christian man again. He listened to her this time, telling her of his religion, and it felt like she was viewing it from a new light. When she accepted that Christ could save her too, a fallen demon, thunder crackled above, as if the world was unsure what to do with her. But a peace came over her, and she convinced the Christian man to come away with her. 

Together they returned to the meadow dwelling, and the two of them were untouchable. They married and had children. And while the children exhibited demonish abilities, they were taught to praise the One True Lord. 

Those were the beginnings of the McFarlanes, Emery, the Christian man, and Isabella, the nicknamed demon. Ever since, the line has continued. However, every year when the descendants turn twenty two, their power disappears, and they are left as just another mortal human. 

We are misunderstood. But you won't misunderstand us, will you?
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