Stardust/Commands (Poetry)


Stardust/Commands

By Asche Keegan

Catch me when I’m falling, 
Through the dark parts of my mind. 
See through it when I’m walling
Back the hopes that rule my heart. 
Hear me when I’m calling
For a friend, a sister, a lover. 

Find me when I’m flying
Close to clouds of light and stardust. 
Hold me when I’m crying
Because of all I’ve left to learn. 
Correct me when I’m lying
When I'm hiding how I feel. 

Answer when I’m ringing
Because I have so much to say. 
Call with me when I’m singing
And all my sorrows have gone away;
Yet, lift me up when I’m bringing
Myself aching to my knees. 

Battle with me when I’m fighting
Against all the world can give
And run with me when I’m biting
Away more than I can chew. 
Chase me when I’m lighting
Little fires under our wings, then 

Love me like I love you
Hold me close and true
Tell me that you love me,
And I will say it too.

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4 comments

  1. Exquisite, especially the last stanza. Such a beautiful poem.

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  2. I love the last stanza, it's beautiful! And the rest is also great as well! Nicely done!

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    1. Thank you so much for the response! I appreciate it!

      Also, I haven't seen you active in awhile. How have you been?

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